Saturday, April 11, 2009

When Love happens..!!


She sat, drowned with thoughts and emotions, peeping through the moist windows of her room into the wet street, as the rain suppressed into a mere trickle. Every drop of that evening’s drizzle seemed as though it was trying to convey her something. She, in the past had loved everything associated with rain, the fragrance of the newly wet sand, the scenery of green wet trees and the sight of little kids dancing and jumping on the puddles formed after the downpour. But the present dint quite project a pleasant picture. Deep down inside her, she felt that the ‘rain’ exhibited it’s other side to her and she set about importing darker meanings, with ‘pain’ as it’s only ingredient.

As she exposed her eyes to the outer world through the modest little window, she noticed an old man, ripping his muscles, dragging a heavy carriage which was completely loaded with goods. Her sight then shifted to a little girl playing, splashing water over other kids. The contrast was evidently glaring at her now. She realized what rain meant for both of them. For that little girl, it was yet another time to enjoy, feeling the splash of the fresh water. But for that old man, it was just another day. He had to be blind to this rain, he had to be numb to those falling drops of water, and he had to work to feed his kids. He had to be oblivious of his surroundings. Work was all he could see.

The hitting contrast took her mind back in time leaving her gloomier. Her mind wandered into her past and to its implications in the present. She thought about the responsibilities she had to cope with, about the burdens, about the losses she had gone through and about every possible matter that was responsible for her present state of mind. She was so lost in her thoughts that a thunderbolt had to bring her back to this world.

The drizzle had now thinned out and the street outside was getting back to its busy self. She sat still, fixing herself in her customary position, looking out of the window capturing all the wandering emotions. Just then, she noticed a guy of about her age, with his trouser folded up, completely drenched in rain, hopping his way towards the ice-cream parlour. She stood on her toes, moved her head left and right, up and down, but couldn’t quite capture the guy’s face.

A minute later, she saw him emerge out with an ice-cream. He found a seat by the compound wall to relish the feel of ‘ice-cream’ blending with the lovely weather overhead. She couldn’t let her eyes off his acts of innocence and the cuteness. He was all smiles basking the feel of this lovely evening, savouring every bit of everything. He, his ice-cream, his smile, his carefree attitude, everything took her to inspiration. She questioned to herself if it was really that tough to forget everything and taste such small tiny bits of happiness along the way. She felt her heart lighten. She felt inspired. With every glare at the guy, she felt the need of such a person in her life. She felt the need of a break, a break from her burdening obligations and duties. She wanted to taste freedom, a freedom without the tag - *Conditions Apply.*



At that very inspirational moment, she wanted to break all those shackles and felt the need of someone special to free her mind from all these. She dint want to miss the fun anymore, so stood, threw her jacket away and hurried her way out into the open. She skipped into the ice cream parlor, bought an ice cream for herself, and walked towards the guy. She excused herself to have a seat next to him, smiled and sat imagining herself resting over the guy’s shoulder.

“Hello! I’m Annie.” She smiled which made her heart lose a ton of weight.

“Hello! I’m Sylvestor.” He returned a cheerful smile.


To Be Continued....


15 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hello I am kajal!

*takes a seat between them*
*orders a huge basket of chocolate icecream*
*starts talking about how rains inspire her poems*
*goes on talking for half an hour*
*kajal's phone rings*
*she excuses herself and goes on attending the call and gets vanished from the corner of the street*
*the shopowner forces these two to pay the bill for kajal's icecream basket*


-moral of the story - mushkil samay mein pyaar aur badhta hai..
:)

they can thank kajal later.. :P


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on a serious note i loved the way the beginning has come out..its different.. its about breaking free from inhibitions.. its about a girl.. and i so gonna relate to it..

looking forward for the rest of the love to happen.. :)



and btw RT & RJ - Congratulations for this joint blog..

mera aashirwaad tum dono ke sath hai..
ishwar kare tumhara chittha (blog) din duguni (two times) raat chouguni(four times) tarakki kare.


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chal Arjun ab mere bribe ke paise nikaal ;)

Blogger said...

cool blog guys!!
hopin to get a nice blend of R (T & J) :D

i remember our maths teacher in school did dis way too...hehe...one day he wrote on the black board:
H(OLIDAY OMEWORK) !! hehe...n den looked at us n smiled n said... H common le lia..hehe.. :D

btw..very nice story...will wait to read more...emotions expressed well...rain..yes it has d power to make everything b'ful on the one hand...n it can also make things gloomy n painful....depends on the state of ur mind..or rather heart!

great goin guys! :)

Sunil Kosuru said...

Very well termed tag line Two faces of a coin.... with nice instances of kids and old man.
Good Luck R(T & J)

R ( T - J ) said...

@ Kajal,

First of all, c'mon Kajal I didn't get to eat even a spoonful out of that HUUUUUGGGGEEE basket of chocolate ice-cream and you mad us to pay for it!!
Pyaar bahut badh gaya... no problems, next time dekh lenge hum! :P

I am glad you liked the beginning... we will not be disappointing you in future too!! :)

Apke aashirwad ke liye *bows down*

Keep reading... :)

Cheers!

*PEACE*

R ( T - J ) said...

@ Priyanka,

You described rain in the best possible way! Good... :)

You hope to get a good blend of R (T&J)...we promise you that you will!

Keep comin'...

Cheers!

*PEACE*

R ( T - J ) said...

@ Sunny,

Thank you so much...

Abhi toh starting hai, aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya! :P

And do keep visiting! :)

Cheers!

*PEACE*

Arjun said...

@kajal

mushkil samay mein pyaar aur badhta hai..

Thats okay... but bill?? cheater.. :P

I've given ur address to the shop owner...... ippo yanna pandra???? :P

hehe.. thanks for the comment ya..

Anonymous said...

nice blog and nice to see two very good story writer together at one place and i also like the story that they started

nice topic to start it

best of luck
you will rock in the blog world

Anonymous said...

@kajal,
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i want icecream too! :P we siblings can hog together! RJ will pick up the bill! he's loaded with cash! ;)

@rt,rj
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u better write again soon...am dyin of anxiety to find what happens next! :)

HURRY

Akansha Agrawal said...

I'm in love too... with the blog template... I am planning to steal it... *devilish intentions...* I am looking forward to two sides of the coin... ;;)

Love the way you've made it R(T&J)... completely fundu che! :D

About the story... hmm... I thn=ink each one of us feels this way... sometime, wants to break free of everything, and rains have the tendency of increasing this craving for freedom manifold... sincerely! Love the way the story is going... what happens next... :-ss

Anya said...

hi
hello i am chriz

i wanna take her out for date

nice work by you two.. keep up the good work...

www.chronicwriter.com

R ( T - J ) said...

@ Chirag,

Thanks for your wishes and those super duper compliments! :)

@ Leo,

Thoda intezaar... Will surely post it soon!

@ Akansha,

I'll sue you for the template... :P
*Wicked looks*

I won't let you wait for so long...will post the next one asap!

@ Chriz,

Thank you ... :)

Arjun said...

@Akansha

Wat will u give me if i give u this template???? Come to a settlement..!! :P

Cheques accepted... cash recommended .. both together- preferred... :P

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Arjun and @R(T@amp;J)
Erm... I'll just take the XML code... which is priceless... :D :P

Yamini Jain said...

your blog is a pleasant read =)
keep going !